Bred in Captivity by Jadzialove (NC-17)
- Jan. 5th, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Title: Bred in Captivity by Jadzialove
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Categories: post-canon (EWE), Harlequin, hurt/comfort, drama
Length: Long (~15,000 words)
Warnings: n/a
Author on LJ:
jadzialove
Website: http://archive.skyehawke.com/authors.php?no=1668
Review:
After the war, Snape is put on trial for murdering Dumbledore. Harry comes to his defense and, as a result, Snape is sentenced to five years. With Harry. Whee!
Two men who hate each other (well, sort of) are forced to live in close quarters for a long period of time. What can you say to that but: yay Harlequin! Snape is epsecially good in this fic as he does his best to be the absolute worst possibleprisoner guest ever, while for his part, Harry does his best to be the world's best host. With fantastic cameos from Ron and Hermione, this is just a wonderful feel-good fic to brighten a rainy day.
Bred in Captivity
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Harry/Snape
Categories: post-canon (EWE), Harlequin, hurt/comfort, drama
Length: Long (~15,000 words)
Warnings: n/a
Author on LJ:
Website: http://archive.skyehawke.com/authors.php?no=1668
Review:
After the war, Snape is put on trial for murdering Dumbledore. Harry comes to his defense and, as a result, Snape is sentenced to five years. With Harry. Whee!
Two men who hate each other (well, sort of) are forced to live in close quarters for a long period of time. What can you say to that but: yay Harlequin! Snape is epsecially good in this fic as he does his best to be the absolute worst possible
Bred in Captivity

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This was one of those stories that was epic despite its length. I loved the characterizations. Hermione in this was adorable. The only thing I would have liked is a little more explanation of what happened in the five years. They passed too quickly.
Thanks for the rec. Also, I've been meaning to ask you if you read BTVS/ATS. Due to lack of recs by you in that fandom I've always suspected not, but...well enquiring minds want to know.
I definitely agree that those five years could (and probably should) have been expanded:)
Re: BTVS and ATS -- When I first got into fanfic years ago, I actually did so through Buffy and The X-Files. Unfortunately, I'm finding it very difficult to get back into either fandom, possibly because I was so disgusted by both shows by the time they ended their run (I didn't even watch the last two seasons of the X-Files) that I didn't have much interest left in the characters.
With regards to Buffy specifically: On the one hand, I don't like Buffy. At all. On the other hand, I don't like character bashing at all. It's very hard to find a fic in the Buffy fandom that doesn't include one of those as a key component to the story. I'd be more interested in reading ATS fic (because I still liked that show when it ended), but I find Angel himself to be quite boring and Wesley to be pretty annoying and no one but me seems to have liked Connor. If someone could point me to a fic about god!Fred (I can't remember her name) and Connor kicking ass, I'd be all over it, but I doubt such a fic has been written:)
On the bad side of the HP fandom there seem to be far too many fics that are similar to really bad BTVS. And there are way too many of the bad fics out there.
I've been more in love with Merlin recently, it's so easy to find really great and quite good Merlin fics, and it's rare to find anything shorter than long.
I actually have a really strong thing against both long and curly hair in guys so although I've read a few Sentinel fics that I liked quite a lot (most notably Point of Contact series by Jane Davitt and a few stories by litgal), I find it quite difficult to read that fandom in the first place.
The thing I like about the BTVS/ATS fandom is the sheer number of pairings that are actually written. And I'll admit that it's pretty much the only fandom in which I can tolerate something more than a twosome (core four fic can really make sense when you think about the joining spell). As far as the shows went, I was most fond of seasons two, four, and five and honestly think someone should be shot for the final season, but the really neat thing about Buffy writers is their ability to do post-canon work that has characters in weird and random places (often without Buffy present at all, and sometimes with her present in such a way that you almost start to like her). ATS I generally can only stand human au's, mainly because Angel is such a vanilla character and Angelus is such a twisted freak that it's too difficult to reconcile the two.
I could probably find some interesting rare pairings in ATS if you have any interest. One of the best stories I've ever read in the Jossverse was actually a Riley/Xander pairing called Song of Iowa by EntreNous. There are so many interesting pairings out there though. Connor is actually one of the characters you find less often (unless you count the really twisted writings of such people as ash_carpenter) but you can still find him in some stories worth reading. And there's a plethora of Fred-god-king fics if you don't mind the fact that she's usually just a supporting character (there was one really good fic where she's paired with Spike, but it was by sexymermaid so it's lost to the ether). So thanks again, and all.
And ditto with BTVS/ATS: it's a fandom in which I don't have an OTP so if you know of any fabulous fic that's long, has a happy ending, and doesn't include non-con I'd love to hear about them. Thanks!
Next, how about a lovely story or two by darling
Finally, how about a little Giles/Xander.
If you liked any of these pairings let me know...I have gobs of recs for all of them. Oh, and let me quick give you the site for Song of Iowa (http://entrenous88.livejournal.com/tag/song+of+iowa), which is just...gah.
Thanks!
If you'd like some Merlin of the Arthur/Merlin variety, I do have a few bookmarks set aside. First off,
Now
Now how about the dear
Okay, I really really liked this fic. It seemed ridiculously well-written and quite beautiful in an angsty angsty angsty way. Doubled Over With the Hunger of Lions (http://nightanddaze.livejournal.com/126582.html?style=mine) is one of those fics that is magical in the best sense of the word. Really quite breathtaking at 23,000 words.
And how do you feel about repeating time fic?
Finally, although it's nowhere near long enough,
Erm, yeah, so thanks for allowing me to feel like I'm contributing in some sense to this great great world of rec-dom.
Thanks!
I'll attempt to find some other bookmarks in delicious. It's been a while since I've been on the site. Not that it's been that important considering the time of the year.
Right now I'm just waiting with bated breath for
Pru: Honestly, I just don't like her writing. The fact that her fans dogpile anyone who dares say something negative about said writing just exacerbated the issue.
And Star Trek Reboot is awesome! I actually think that might explode a bit more than Merlin has, as it's definitely geared towards an adult audience. Plus, you know, all of the characters except Kirk are awesome:)
The reason I still stick with Buffy is the whole fact that stories are still being written about it even six years after the end of the show. That's gotta count for something.
See, pru-wise I can't help but really enjoy most of her long stories in SGA. There are a few that I thought really poorly written and a few that I can understand why you wouldn't care for at all. I love humor in my fics, though, and pru is one of the only writers I know who can write an angsty story and still make me laugh my ass off. (The real reason I like her is she writes aus where John's as much of an asshole as he is on the show...kinda awesome.)
Almost all of her SV is not my cuppa, on the other hand. And nothing against drp, but if I ever am still writing timestamps for a fic months after it's finished...
It makes perfect sense that Star Trek Reboot will be the next big thing. I mean you already have so many backers in the classic fandom, and talk about a movie that will bring fangirls. (Again didn't much care for it. The comedy parts really squicked.)
And obviously Sherlock Holmes is going to explode now...at least I hope.
At any rate, SGA was a show geared towards adults, with adult characters and I think that helped. Season two Merlin has sacrificed characters, characterization, consistency, and coherency to cram in as many fart jokes, body humor, and slap-stick comedy bits as possible in a given season. The end result is that Morgana barely appeared at all (which removed nearly all of the impact from her eventual departure), the Gwen/Arthur 'romance' felt both forced and awkward, and the Arthur/Merlin friendship has become the relationship equivalent of yo-yo dieting. It makes it hard for someone to keep watching the show, much less want to write for it.
And I hear you when it comes to sticking with fandoms that are still producing fic. The Sentinel is one of those fandoms for me:)
Pru: I'm not saying that the writing is bad, just that I don't like her writing style. This is mostly due to her pacing (she goes very slow at the beginning and then rushes the end) and her character choices, which I rarely like (I recognize that Sheppard is an asshole in canon -- which is why I don't watch canon:) And, well, the actual writing itself doesn't do much for me.
ST Reboot: I will admit that the comedy bits/Kirk bits didn't help the movie much -- actually, I'd love to see a fic where the movie is rewritten entirely *without* Kirk:)
And amen on the Sherlock Holmes explosion! Right now the fandom is dominated by an anti-slasher, which drives me up a wall.
My problem with Merlin is the fact that it's made overseas, so I have no idea how good the quality is in comparison with other shows over there unless you count Dr. Who (usually pretty good, sometimes terrible and sometimes fantastic) or Torchwood (evil, evil, evil). I keep thinking that when you consider the size of the country, nothing of any worth should be created there.
I've spent the past few days muddling through Tira Nog's Until Proven (http://m.www.tiranog.southroad.com/harry_potter/Until_Proven_Part-I.htm) which gave me a bit more perspective on her writing style. Really the plot-line isn't terrible, just a bit harlequin, and no one can fault her for that. And the sex, although prosaic, is not consistantly AWFUL. It's more a matter of dialogue than anything else. And ironically, unlike most authors who have big problems with dialogue it's not a lack of ability to discern different characters' voices or even a simple disregard for providing enough information to keep the reader apprised of the characters' motivations. Instead it's an absolutely ridiculous amount of description thrown in the middle of every dialogue in the story. It's actually the only place where the author is consistant, while causing havock with the timeline and choosing to use supporting characters only when needed for a given scene.
Despite the total lack of any kind of warning about the rape, torture, and creepy crossover with SGA scenes I actually liked several parts of this fic. The beginning was totally original, and at least half of the scenes with Hermione and/or Ron were amusing and warming. But then you have a fic that ends with absolutely nothing resolved despite the fact that it was at least double the length it needed to be.
I just wish the beta had had the balls to cut half the words from this fic, as it so clearly needed (I'm sorry, but when the author feels the need to not once but twice remind the reader of an anecdote during a single conversation scene I honestly cannot give them any credit at all).
I do have a bit of fic, if you'd like. Another author who is really quite innovative in the BTVS 'verse is
Now I thought I might have heard somewhere that you like sap. If you do,
To keep with the theme,
I'll take your word on it for Until Proven:) Though you might want to check out her Highlander and SGA stories -- I find them overwhelmingly better than her HP fics (especially her Highlander series, the last story of which I reread regularly).
Thanks for the recs!
Next off I suppose you deserve a story...Once upon a time, there was a girl who had never watched House. Like many girls around her, she found it off-putting, and fairly annoying.
But when she first started watching the new fanfic community she found (aka you), she started actually reading House fic.
Although she had never watched an episode, she had watched previews. And for some reason, she always thought Omar Epps' character was Wilson.
So in other words, she always thought House/Wilson fic was very poorly described.
Then, one day last week, she realized that Harry Potter wouldn't hold forever (or for any time apparently). And instead decided to look up former fandoms' she'd given up on.
House was the first she decided on. And so she first decided to watch the show, and has been hooked on Foreman/House ever since.
Anyhow, I just wanted to mention that
Thanks for the rec!
So first off, if we're being perfectly honest, there are several real reasons HP fics can be atrocious writers. First off, we have the probable age of said writers. If they read the books when they first came out and were actually the appropriate ages for the books, there's a high probability that they're young. And the fact that these are kids' books makes the circle complete. There will ALWAYS be young authors in this fandom.
Next off, there's the simple fact that there are FAR too many people who read the books to begin with. Which means authors are from every nationality imaginable. (And I thought trying to read my Canadian/Eniglish/Hawaiian friends' stories was difficult.)
Finally there's the simple fact that the characters are presented in school so the amateur author will always keep the characters there. Chan is the only possibility when three quarters of the characters are young enough to be the other characters' children. At least in the silly authors' minds. You'll find an eery amount of seventeen/eighteen-year-old Harry fics. I lost all respect for
So other than ridiculous amounts of House fic, I do actually have fic for you, if you choose to accept it.
First,
Next there's a creepy if also fantastic fic out there called Dirty Dancing Spander Style (http://spanderfiles.com/arvs/savoytruffle/ddss.html) by the lovely
Have a nice day. Don't drink the red wine...
Thanks for the recs!
So, although I've officially given up on rec lists for HP fic, I've started just reading the fic on Walking the Plank. And have managed to stumble across some decent Harry/Severus.
LoupGarou1750 (http://loupgarou.dreamwidth.org) is really very good at writing broken Harry, usually with Harry actually being an adult. Both Sadness of Eros (http://www.walkingtheplank.org/archive/viewstory.php?sid=2667&warning=4) and Death and the Open Mind (http://www.walkingtheplank.org/archive/viewstory.php?sid=3252) are epic-length fics with a very bad no-good Snape and a Harry betraying Ginny. I was seriously blown away by this author's stories. Although I would recommend being careful with the first, as Harry is very much a scoundrel.
Thanks!
I'm guessing the second story would be more to your taste anyhow, but the first was entirely to mine. Mei might like it.
In both of these, Severus is a total forceful top/dom. (In fact, in all of her stories he seems to be the one in charge.)
The Fourth Year (http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=11420&font=&size=) is another story where Snape is Harry's prisoner. I love that the story first starts four years after the war's ended. (40,000 words)
Both of these are from Snape's POV and have both of the boys' characterizations down to a T.