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Imperfections by Dasha (PG-13)

  • Aug. 1st, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Title: Imperfections by Dasha
Fandom: The Sentinel
Pairing: gen
Categories: AU, angst, h/c, crossover (very slight, with Monk)
Length: Long (~23,000 words)
Warnings: n/a

Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] dashamte 
Website: http://soulcake.skeeter63.org/dasha.html

Review:
A sentinels are known AU in which Lee Brackett is Jim's abusive guide and Blair is about to wash out of the guide program. Lots of comfort with a touch of hurt ensues.

This is, by far, my favorite Sentinels are known universe. There is no slavery, there is no systemic government abuse, and there is no oppression of anyone. Instead you have genetically gifted people who are highly sought after by employers and who hire a support person to assist them in everyday functioning. It's all so very plausible and rational and practical and I just want to hug Dasha to bits for creating this universe.

On top of that, you have a simply amazing Jim, one who is strong when he needs to be and who is most emphatically *not* a victim, but who has also been beat down for long enough that hints of vulnerability keep shining through. Blair is equally layered: uncertain but dedicated and determined to be strong for his sentinel. Couple all of that with an interesting plot, some philosophical discussion of sentinels and guides, and a whole station full of secondary characters who make mistakes but who mean well and who come through in the end and you have one brilliant Sentinel AU.

Note: Imperfections is actually the first of a series. I'm not reccing the rest of the series (go here for my rant on the subject), but you can find the full series (including non-Sentinel stories) here

Imperfections

Comments

[identity profile] terrie01.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 1st, 2009 06:49 pm (UTC)
Just as a counter point to the whole "It should be slash because they don't seem to be involved with anyone else" part of the rant. Later stories address the fact that the lack of dating, for either, is that they're still working on building a healthy Sentinel/Guide relationship. It would be nice as slash, but it does work as gen.

Though I will agree that the Highlander stuff is the weakest of the series. It's worth reading for the other stuff, but skim the Highlander only material.

Being only a passing DS fan, I have no comment on that stuff.

But story IX? Is really good.
[identity profile] jane-elliot.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 1st, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
But by that point haven't they been working on the Sentinel/Guide relationship for *years*? I just find it really hard to believe that either man (but especially Blair) can go years without having sex. And if they're going off randomly to satisfy their needs with a one-night stand or eight, that just makes me like them even less.

Which one is IX? I never made it that far.
[identity profile] lady-ceylonna.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 2nd, 2009 12:02 am (UTC)
I believe all the stories so far are withing 9 months to a year of the first one.

One of the later ones explains that Blair had refrained from dating until Jim was more stable - he returned from one data to find Jim on the couch in some kind of distress. Jim hadn't bothered dating as he believed for a while that he had maybe 5 or 10 years tops before he died and that things wouldn't get better so why bother.

As for making it Blair/Jim slash, I could see it in the long term. In the short term, I think it has to be gen. Given Jim's history, Blair wouldn't even consider it -- to much potential for coercement. And Jim clearly isn't thinking about sex at all at this point in the story.

All that aside, later imperfections stories are some of my least favorite from Dasha, whom I adore as a writer. The John/Rodney ones are by far my favorite in that world.
[identity profile] jane-elliot.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 2nd, 2009 12:17 am (UTC)
I guess it just felt like years:)

Honestly, I really enjoy the first story in Imperfections and I do like the SGA ones. The rest (well, through the Highlander one, anyway) just never held my interest and actively frustrated me at times. And, honestly, I don't think making the series slash would have suddenly made me like it more, though by removing the smarm factor I think my frustration level would have been a bit lower.
[identity profile] terrie01.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 2nd, 2009 04:09 pm (UTC)
Umm, no, it hasn't been years. Blair rushes through to take the test maybe three months after meeting Jim (end of that semester) and is then under supervision for a year. So they've known each other maybe a year and a half. And Blair does go on dates the first few months they're together, but after a few, realizes that Jim isn't secure enough in their relationship or himself yet.

IX is the last one, with Alex and the Sentinel Temple.
[identity profile] jane-elliot.livejournal.com wrote:
Aug. 2nd, 2009 06:28 pm (UTC)
Heh. I mentioned to a previous comment that apparently it just feels like years:)

Thanks for the info on IX! Does this mean she's done with the series?

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