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Glass Walls by Ana (R)

  • Feb. 28th, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Title: Glass Walls
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: Jayne/Simon
Categories: AU, Hurt/Comfort
Length: Medium (~8900 words)
Warnings: violence, non-explicit references to prisoner abuse

Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] ana_grrl
Website: n/a

Review:
This is an AU from ep. 1x09 "Ariel", where Simon and Jayne get captured by the autorities, and sent to a maximum security prison on the Outer Rim. While inside prison, Jayne finds himself taking care of an utterly broken Simon, while colluding with the rest of Serenity's crew to make their escape.

This fic is excellent in the fact it makes something that I thought was totally impossible, completely believable: Jayne taking care of Simon while still being in character. Jayne is one of those characters who is deceptively simple, but turns out to be surprisingly complex, and [livejournal.com profile] ana_grrl has a great grasp of his motivations. The narration from Jayne's point of view is also excellent, for exactly the same reasons. Which is not to say, however, that this fic is perfect. The background is a little hand-wavy and confusing, and could probably had used a little more exposition. Simon's extremely rapid mental deterioration is also a little unbelieveable, considering that the author's notes places the time line a little past "Objects in Space", which is what, half a year after Ariel?

Glass Walls

Comments

[identity profile] des-pudels-kern.livejournal.com wrote:
Feb. 28th, 2009 09:09 pm (UTC)
Best Firefly fic ever! One of the ones I come back to reread again and again.
ext_19652: (firefly simon jayne)
[identity profile] spock74.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2009 07:07 am (UTC)
Thank you for reminding me of this one! I'm terrible at bookmarking individual fics I love so I'm glad to find this one. I will say, too, that I think the timeline of the story is a bit more flexible than the reccer thinks. I've always thought that Jayne is in the prison for a long time before Simon shows up, so they've had months, if not years to break Simon down.
[identity profile] lolitakun.livejournal.com wrote:
Mar. 2nd, 2009 01:52 pm (UTC)
That actually does make more sense, thank you!

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