The Dallas Deception by aynslee (NC-17)

  • Sep. 16th, 2010 at 2:18 AM
Title: The Dallas Deception
Fandom: Supernatural RPS
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Categories: angst, AU, drama, harlequin, virgin, (there’s also perceived prostitution)
Length: Long (~25,000)
Warnings: possible past abuse

Author on LJ: [livejournal.com profile] aynslee
Author Website: List of Fics

Review:
Jared is the best personal assistant any boss can have. When he starts working for Jensen, everything is smooth sailing—until Chris and his big fat mouth enter the picture.

There are several things I don’t love about this fic. The premise is totally unbelievable, granted that’s pretty common for harlequin fic. There’s not a good group of supporting characters. I don’t really get the timeline…I get what the author was going for, but it falls a little short.

Now let’s focus on the positives. Jensen and Jared’s backgrounds are both well-drawn and believable. Both of the boys are completely in character. The angst is top-notch. The writing in general is impeccable, and although this isn’t one of my top-ten favorite stories, it’s definitely in my top 100.

The Dallas Deception


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